Em resposta ao test plot do Homem-Aranha, a Marvel me enviou um novo roteiro, desta vez uma história do Visão.
Diferente do roteiro anterior, que determinava o que devia aparecer em cada página e até mesmo algumas seqüências de quadrinhos, este novo roteiro deixava a diagramação por conta do desenhista.
Os desenhos foram enviados à Marvel em novembro de 2001.
We shall begin our little epic on a windy airport runway. The Vision, a disgruntled plainclothes detective McBain (middle-aged gentleman) and assorted uniformed policeman stare skyward, observing an approaching jet. (...)
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The Vision quickly attacks the revolutionaries by flying into two of them, piercing their bodies with his hands and "disrupting" them. Holding her dying husband in her arms, Alice Carella attempts to get the Vision's attention, but fails as our hero turns to barrel over other revolutionaries. Realizing that his men are no match for the ghostly gladiator, Marco produces a handgrenade and hurdles it. Passengers gasp in terror as the Vision dives for the bomb and smothers the explosion with his diamond hard body.
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